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Carolyn's avatar

Paid $8 airplane WiFi to read this and was worth every penny

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Chris Wright's avatar

I haven't read a single word and I'm already hooked. Inject Fiction Friday into my bones

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Hayden's avatar

Classic deFries cliff hanger!

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Eben's avatar

Oh yeah. Keep it coming Will!

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Hadley Greene's avatar

Omg. Sophie ?!

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Tiffany Wyne's avatar

When & where do we pre-order the rest of this story?

Friday Fiction - so far, very good

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Sabs.b's avatar

Sooooo when do the other 47 chapters come out?!!

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Karla Godinez's avatar

Love it… more please!

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Maggie Rosen's avatar

I want more! ♥️

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Mike Miccoli's avatar

This makes me want to publish more fiction. It’s very good!

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RML's avatar

Will, (para social familiarity) this is really good. Left me wanting more. Can’t wait for you to share more!

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Lisa Janelle's avatar

Love. But also saddened not being able to keep reading! That was great.

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